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TD-18 (In Progress) by The-Xie TD-18 (In Progress) by The-Xie
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6/2 - 5:00PM: Added rail cover to bottom rail. Other small changes.

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The Serleon TD-18 that has been sitting in my concepts folder for weeks at this stage. Keep telling myself I'll add things to it, that I'll improve it, and yet here it fucking is still the same.

So...

I'm uploading it here because one, it is pretty much done and two, maybe I'll figure out what to change with it by listening to your input. So yea, give me something constructive, give me things to add, tell me what's wrong with it because there's bound to be things that I missed. I'll keep a log here to point out what I added/changed and when I feel it's truly "done", I'll edit everything to be the final version.

Other than that, it STILL needs a name, so does the guy who made it. So if you got suggestions for that as well, throw em'.

Anyways, enjoy.

Copyright of me. Because I'm awesome like that.

(Not really)
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:iconrazort300:
razort300 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
cool
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:iconlonewolfassassin:
LoneWolfAssassin Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
looks like a Beretta cx4 storm rifle. there are very considerable differences tho looks cool.
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:iconttrlabs:
ttrlabs Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bro, if I make my own game company, I'm hiring you as our sketch artist. I love your work!
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, this is awesome. :D
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:iconrenaldashfield197:
RenaldAshfield197 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
How on earth did you made this?
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Photoshop CS2 and a bunch of time refining over and over again.
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:icontheestevan32:
TheEstevan32 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ooh... now this, I like!
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:iconfoxforrester:
FoxForrester Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A beautiful weapon. :3
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ;)
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:iconfoxforrester:
FoxForrester Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome. :3
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:iconbaconwaffles:
Baconwaffles Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
Micro-jackal, that's what it looks like. Like the difference between the TAR-21 full size and the Micro Tavor, same layout, similar stock and grip. Similar mags.
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:iconthelivingredbaron:
TheLivingRedBaron Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ugh! number four! Is the arming mechanism beneath the barrel? Isn't that a little far forward, considering the rounds being loaded are in the back? You could move the cocking handle to the top of the receiver, either as a Famas style finger hook or a lager version of an uzi/mac flat-topped knob with a notch in it to preserve your sight picture.
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:iconmack-ford:
Mack-Ford Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Shut up.
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:iconczechbiohazard:
CzechBiohazard Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lulz..... :P
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:iconthelivingredbaron:
TheLivingRedBaron Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I realize I made too many comments, but they were mostly pertinent. I would like to see any of your art though, so I COULD critique it.
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:iconmack-ford:
Mack-Ford Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
No.
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:iconthelivingredbaron:
TheLivingRedBaron Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Because it's a cool name! (I know, like three comments?)
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:iconthelivingredbaron:
TheLivingRedBaron Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And also the guy who built it should be named Calvin Parrera
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:iconthelivingredbaron:
TheLivingRedBaron Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You should totally add a dust cover over the ejection port, and a flash-hider on the end of that barrel. Make it a AK-74 style slant-brake, threaded for a suppressor. Also make the rear sight an adjustable ghost ring with tritium inserts in the shape a smiley face. And I do want fries with that. And also a ranger mag plate for the magazine.
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Going to say no to the dust cover and the flash hider. Because of the way weapons have improved in the universe this gun exists, something like a dust cover is unnecessary. The only thing that would cause concern in regards of what can get inside and mess with the internals would be physical objects like rocks and the like. I also just plain dislike flash hiders, especially for some something like a PDW. For a sniper it makes sense, but not for something up close.

Also, ranger plates are silly. I understand why they're used, but they still look silly. So I'm going to pass on that as well.

In regards to the charging handle. You know it doesn't need to be right next to the magazine right?
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:iconthelivingredbaron:
TheLivingRedBaron Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I know, I just thought it'd look cooler. You think ranger plates are silly?
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yea, I do :P
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:iconcryonindustries:
CryonIndustries Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Is this a left-handed firearm? Is it caseless? Does it do forward-ejection?

I like the angle of the magazine. Very interesting.
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ambidextrous. No. No.

I like my angles.

=)
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:iconcryonindustries:
CryonIndustries Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
So, the charging handle is on both sides? How do you switch the ejection port? Is that the magazine release above the trigger and not the grip? It would be a good idea to make sure that the shooter doesn't have to move his hands too much to operate the firearm unless reloading.

Hope this feedback helps further the design. :)
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes. The grip can detect which way you're using the rifle and will adjust to eject the rounds out of the correct side on it's own. Yes and it's not that hard to hit a button like that you know.
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:iconcryonindustries:
CryonIndustries Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
As far as names go, Lambert would make sense, since Berlion is a town in Belgium. Lambert is a Belgian surname.
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:iconcryonindustries:
CryonIndustries Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
Nathan Lambert? How's that sound?
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm, going to leave it at a maybe for now. I dig the name, just not sure about having it for this guy. Will think on it.
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:icona15godzilla:
a15godzilla Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Well at least your getting feedback, the design is eye catching.
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks =)
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:iconscrewfaceromeo:
ScrewfaceRomeo Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That trigger guard looks long enough that you could put a second trigger in there, maybe for under-barrel attachments?
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There we some attachments planned, a few even basically made, but the reason for the guard being so large was to accommodate users with armored gloves. Maybe I should shorten it a bit.
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:iconhuntrag94:
HuntraG94 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
nice design here dude.
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:iconthe-xie:
The-Xie Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ;)
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:iconhuntrag94:
HuntraG94 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
you're welcome dude.
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